March 16th, 2010
Resolved Question: im writing a book, tell me what you think..?
Im writing a book, i want you to tell my what you REALLY think, here is the first chapter, its a little long but plzz read all of it, and go easy on me because im a beginner, info on the girl: has short dark hair, GRAY eyes, age 13,) thanks and please tell me what you think, oh and I’m gonna FIX the punctuation later. i just wanted to quickly write the first chapter. thanks!
Chapter ~1~
Hurry up Marlee! or you will miss the bus! I could hear my Mom yelling outside my door. I groaned. I always have hated new schools, especially the first day. It’s always the same thing, getting teased, and pushed around.
I grabbed my jacket and backpack. The bus was on time, I groaned again as i stepped onto the bus. it was practically full, i always hated sitting by some kid I did not know. than unexpectedly some girl with brown hair in the back beckoned me to sit by her. so I walked down the isle, and sat by her. at first she was quiet. then she said -so this is your first day? she asked. she had a british accent. I cleared my throat. uh, yeah. i responded. -um..I’m Sadie, by the way, Sadie Fisher. and you must be..Marlee ledger, right? she asked eagerly. uh, yeah, um..how did you know? i asked suspiciously. oh, everyone has been buzzing about some ‘new girl’ coming today.. she explained. oh..great. I sighed. so..you must be pretty smart then? she asked. yeah, I guess you could say i study allot.. she laughed, and i had to smile. then we arrived at sun creek middle school. come on, ill show you around! she smiled. hey, Sadie, thanks for being so nice to me.. i finally got myself to say. no problem, i know what it feels like on my first day at a new school. then the bell rang. come on! or we’ll be late. the first day is always the same, everyone whispering and snickering, and people pushing you around, just as i knew it would be. but somehow Sadie made it all kind of better, she stuck with me and helped me find my next class. she was already my best friend. at the end of school we were going to meet eachother at our lockers, ours were right next to eachother. she wasent here yet. so i decided i would dump some of my things into my new locker. then i thought to myself, wait..was my new locker number 23? or 24? i hesitated. um…I’m pretty sure its number 23? i decided i would take my chances. suprisingly, it was unlocked. when i opened it expecting it to be empty, it was full of CD’s and gameboys and a couple books and that kind of stuff, but it smelled so good. then i thought..hmm..this isent MY locker. so i quickly closed it and behind the locker door was some guy. and it made my whole body jump. enjoying my locker? he asked, almost laughing. ugh, you scared me! uh, n-no! um..I..-I was just trying to find MY locker. i studdered, he had my eyes locked on his green eyes.Mmhm.. anyways, I’m Riley Brooke.Um, I’m Marlee ledger. did you say your name is Riley? i asked. yeah.. he said. oh..-Is there somthing wrong with that? he asked a little confused. -uh no, no! um, its just that thats my middle name. i gave him a half smile. oh..um..cool. we were still staring into eachothers eyes. then some other guys started calling him. Yo, Riley c’mon man! we gotta go! I assumed those were his friends. well. ill see ya around. then he turned around and went with his friends. i could hear them whispering to him. is that your girlfriend Riley? miss gray eyes? they snickered. shut up david! riley hissed. usually thats the first thing people notice about me, my dark short hair and light gray eyes…then Sadie came running around the corner. ugh, sorry im late. she was breathing heavily. mr. gull had to have a ‘talk’ with me. she explained. oh, thats alright. i assured her. so, did you find your locker? she asked. uhm..not exactly..number 24. right here. she showed me where my locker was. i dumped my stuff in there and we started to walk to the school parking lot to get on the bus to go home. while we were driving Sadie asked me, So, have you met any other people?…hello in there! Marlee! she started to wave her hand in front of me, i finally got out of thinking of what just happened and about riley, he seemed like a nice guy. oh, sorry Sadie, i was just thinking.. she rolled her eyes. ever since we met at the lockers you’ve just seemed so dazed or dazzled.. she added. did you meet jake?! she demanded. what the-?! who’s jake?! i answered. she looked relieved. thank goodness, listen if you ever meet a boy with blond hair and goes by jake, dont get to attached ok? he plays every girl he meets.ok.. i answered. -but i did meet a boy named Riley Brooke. I added. that name made my whole body tingly. Riley, Riley..doesent ring a bell, is he the one who made you all..dazzled? I told her about when we met and all that. she was giggling the whole time. he sounds..nice.. she smiled. the the bus stopped.it was my stop. well. ill see ya tomarrow Sadie.
